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1、單元寫作
寫作五步成文(讀后續(xù)寫)
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
What's the best way to experience America? I advise one step at a time. And that's exactly what I set out to do in 2006 when I tried to visit all the fifty_states in fifty days and run a marathon in each of them while staying there.
On a warm day
2、in September, I decided to begin my trip of running fifty marathons, in fifty states, in fifty days with the Lewis & Clark marathon in St. Charles, Missouri. It seemed like a fitting place to begin, because it was the 200th anniversary of the Lewis & Clark expedition (探險)．
After visiting Mis
3、souri, my plan was to head west across the country, stopping in each state to visit, explore and run a marathon. As you might imagine, the preparations, including the schedules and research, were every bit as challenging as the running itself. Due to the embarrassing timing of different marathons
4、across the nation, we weren't always able to follow a straight line from one state to the next. Instead, we could only travel across the country in a complex (復(fù)雜的) web. But that was what made the travel so interesting.
Besides the complex web of travel, the presence of my family made my tr
5、ip more meaningful. My wife, a dentist, had changed her schedule to join me, and our two children Alexandria and Nicholas would be taking fifty days off school, so they wanted to travel with us. My mom, a retired school teacher, would also be part of the team. My_father also came along. Well, we're
6、from Greece, where one family member goes, the others are soon follow. All of them supported my expedition.
It might be easy to conclude that seeing the country so quickly would lead to an unclear impression,_ but just the opposite was true. I remember every single state and every detail ver
7、y clearly, even on this very day, more than a decade later.
注意：
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragraph 1：
After we made careful preparations, my expedition play began finally._____________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
My good physical qualit
9、y was shown in the expedition.
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步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵
前文概要
審體裁：記敘文
審時態(tài)：一般過去時
審前文大意以及要點(diǎn)
who：the author
when: in September, 2006
where: St. Charles, Missouri
what: running fifty marathons, in fifty states, in fifty days
why: stopping in each state to visit, explor
11、e and run a marathon
第一段：作者計劃通過每天跑一次馬拉松長跑，跑過五十個州，親身體驗美國。
第二段：在9月份一個暖和的上午開始了體驗美國的馬拉松賽事。
第三段：作者在每個州停下來參觀、探索和跑馬拉松，但是準(zhǔn)備工作，包括日程安排和研究，都和跑步本身一樣具有挑戰(zhàn)性，這正是旅行如此有趣的原因。
第四段：家人的出現(xiàn)使作者的旅行更有意義，他們都支持作者的探險運(yùn)動。
第五段：作者看到這個國家，清楚地記得每一個州和每一個細(xì)節(jié)，甚至永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記。
步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)
第一段：根
12、據(jù)所給第一句“After we made careful preparations, my expedition play began finally.”可知，作者從密蘇里州開車到科羅拉多州，參加博爾德越野馬拉松。這一地區(qū)的地勢越來越低，氣候變化很大，開始寒冷，突然之間就炎熱起來。
第二段：根據(jù)所給句子“My good physical quality was shown in the expedition.”可知，作者在馬拉松比賽過程中，經(jīng)常接觸一些名人，了解他們的不同文化。身體健壯是一個原因，但喜歡這次活動的主要原因是得到了家人的支持。
步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯
13、，生動描述情節(jié)
已給提示詞匯：
fifty states, marathon, warm, expedition, challenging, travel, family, my father, support, impression
話題激活詞匯：
serious, feel tired, experience, expectation, successfully, drop, become, help, need, find, enjoy, meet, give up, finish, drive, along the highway, fly to, daily mara
14、thon routine, after every marathon, wetness, changes became more serious, be healthy and strong
句式翻譯
1.我們從密蘇里州開車到科羅拉多州。(主謂)
We_drove_from_Missouri_to_Colorado.
2.我們?nèi)ツ莾阂獏⒓硬柕略揭榜R拉松。(介詞短語表目的)
We're_going_there_for_the_Boulder_Backroads_marathon.
3.沿著公路，濕度越來越低。(比較級)
_Along_the_
15、highway_the_wetness_dropped_lower_and_lower.
4.當(dāng)我們飛往阿拉斯加時，變化變得更加嚴(yán)重了。(主從復(fù)合句)
The_changes_became_more_serious_when_we_flied_to_Alaska.
5.我們遇到了一場暴風(fēng)雪！(came across)
We_came_across_a_snowstorm!
6.那對我們的探險很有挑戰(zhàn)性。(進(jìn)行時表將來)
That_was_challenging_for_our_expedition.
7.幸好北方戶外服裝公司
16、幫了我們，所以我們有很多溫暖的衣服。(主從復(fù)合句)
Thankfully，as_the_outdoor_clothing_company_The_North_Face_helped_us,_we_had_plenty_of_warm_clothing.
8.暖和的衣服我們并沒有穿多久。(主謂賓)
We_didn't_wear_warm_clothes_for_long.
9.第二天我們就發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在夏威夷的炎熱地區(qū)了。(主謂賓補(bǔ))
The_next_day_we_found_ourselves_in_the_hot_area_of_Hawaii.
17、
10.除了每天的馬拉松比賽之外，我還喜歡與大人物見面。(enjoy doing sth.)
Apart_from_the_daily_marathon_routine，I_also_enjoyed_meeting_the_great_people.
11.通過這些名人，我體驗了不同的文化。(主謂賓)
Through_these_celebrities,_I_have_experienced_different_cultures.
12.雖然每次馬拉松后我都覺得很累，但我從未想過要放棄。(although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)
Altho
18、ugh_I_felt_tired_after_every_marathon,_I_never__thought_about_giving_up.
13.真正的原因并不是因為我健康強(qiáng)壯，而是因為我得到了所有家庭成員的支持。(lie in)
The_true_reason_didn't_lie_in_that_I_was_healthy_and__strong;_it_lay_in_that_I_gained_the_support_from_all_my_family_members.
14.在他們的期望下，我成功地完成了50個州的50場馬拉松比賽。(with介詞短
19、語)
With_their_expectations，I_finished_the_fifty_marathons_in_fifty_states_successfully.
步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級
1.將1句和2句變?yōu)橐粋€簡單句
We_drove_from_Missouri_to_Colorado_first,_for_the_Boulder_Backroads_marathon.
2.將4句用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改為一個簡單句
We_flying_to_Alaska,_the_changes_became_mor
20、e__serious.
3.將5句用be caught in改寫，且與6句變?yōu)橐粋€復(fù)合句
We_were_caught_in_a_snowstorm,_which_was__challenging_for_our_expedition.
4.將7句改寫為簡單句
Thanks_to_the_help_from_the_outdoor_clothing_company_The_North_Face,_we_had_plenty_of_warm_clothing.
5.將8句和9句變?yōu)橐粋€復(fù)合句
We_needed_it_not_for_l
21、ong,_because_the_next_day_we_found_ourselves_in_the_hot_area_of_Hawaii.
6.將11句改為10句的非限制性定語從句
Apart_from_the_daily_marathon_routine,_I_also_enjoyed_meeting_the_great_people,_through_whom_I_could_experience_different_cultures.
7.將13句用not... but結(jié)構(gòu)改寫
The_real_reason_is_not_because_I_
22、am_healthy_and_strong,_but_because_I_have_the_support_of_all_family_members.
步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，衡水體謄寫并標(biāo)注下劃線
One possible version：
Paragraph 1：
After we made careful preparations, my expedition play began finally. We drove from Missouri to Colorado first, for the Boulder Backroads marathon.
23、 Along the highway the wetness dropped lower and lower. We flying to Alaska, the changes became more serious. We were caught in a snowstorm, which was challenging for our expedition. Thanks to the help from the outdoor clothing company The North Face, we had plenty of warm clothing. But we needed it
24、 not for long, because the next day we found ourselves in the hot area of Hawaii.
Paragraph 2：
My good physical quality was shown in the expedition. Apart from the daily marathon routine, I also enjoyed meeting the great people, through whom I could experience different cultures. Although I felt tired after every marathon, I never thought about giving up. However, the real reason is not because I am healthy and strong, but because I have the support of all family members. With their expectations, I finished the fifty marathons in fifty states successfully.
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2019-2020學(xué)年新教材高中英語 Unit 4 Stage and screen單元寫作練習(xí) 外研版必修第二冊
