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1、議論文（ 觀點(diǎn)對比型、各抒己見型）,觀點(diǎn)對比型 1.提綱式作文：按照表格或提示言之有序，老師是找點(diǎn)給分的。 2.開放式作文：找到最本質(zhì)的特征。 思維訓(xùn)練模式：a. listing; b. reasoning; c. brain storm.,作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,表示時(shí)間關(guān)系：first, second, then, finally/at lastin the end , soon， immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently 表示對稱順序關(guān)系：for one thing for the other thing, on o
2、ne hand,on the other hand，above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally，the former.the latter, 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition，whats worse 表示換一種方式表達(dá)：in other words ,that is to say,表示舉例說明：for example, like, such as, for instance 表示陳述事實(shí)：in fact ,ac
3、tually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表示總結(jié)：on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclusion, from what I have said above 表示因果關(guān)系：as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently, 表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only but also 表達(dá)自
4、己的觀點(diǎn)：in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all that.,范例1：假如你事實(shí)李華，你班同學(xué)最近開長了一場討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),1.關(guān)鍵詞語 體育鍛煉 做早操 增強(qiáng)體質(zhì) 減少疾病 休息 學(xué)習(xí)有效果 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間 投入學(xué)習(xí) 受傷,take exercises do morning exercises build up the body reduc
5、e the disease have a rest study more effectively a waste of time pay attention to study be hurt,2.作文結(jié)構(gòu),1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas . 2.55%of the students think
6、.such as(舉例)（原因） 3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因） 4.In my opinion, I prefer to,3.范文： Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins. 55%of the students
7、 think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. “Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. S
8、ports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective. On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its possible to be hurt in sport
9、s. In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.,練習(xí)：“你們班會(huì)的討論主題是“上大學(xué)是高中生唯一的出路嗎？”請根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫一偏短文，客觀的介紹下討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),關(guān)鍵詞語：widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students 關(guān)鍵句子：of us consider it necessary to go to college 10% of students think it no use going to c
10、ollege 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”,范例2： 某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社正開展一場題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?” 請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。,注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；2短文必須包含表格的全部內(nèi)容。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫,學(xué)生作品1： Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons belo
11、w. For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of
12、 teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.,點(diǎn)評： 亮點(diǎn)：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用 比較靈活 2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。,2、審題不全面，忽略了對青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點(diǎn)是比較大的失誤。,1),2),3),1) Compared,2) more,3) try to make the classes
13、lively and interesting,不足之處：,1、個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需 要改進(jìn)。,學(xué)生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others
14、have a different opinion. They think the teachers who are young are full of energy. Besides, their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.,點(diǎn)評： 亮點(diǎn)： 1、段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊 全，句式表達(dá)
15、比較靈 活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。 2、過渡詞運(yùn)用也比較 熟練。,需要改進(jìn)的地方：,1）,2),3),4),1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones,2) with explanations,3) the 去掉,4) The young teachers,One possible version: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers h
16、ave more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usu
17、ally they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.
18、,練習(xí)：人們對于網(wǎng)上交友持不同的意見請用英語寫一篇學(xué)生網(wǎng)上教友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),關(guān)鍵詞：make friends ,express feeling freely ,foreign studies, a waste of time, get cheated online. 關(guān)鍵句子：Students should place their study ,health ,and safety before other things .,2001年高考書面表達(dá),假設(shè)你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的
19、信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。,2001年高考書面表達(dá),Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weeken
20、ds doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, ev
21、eryone is happy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes, Li Hua,2002年高考書面表達(dá),最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。,Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divid
22、ed on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to bui
23、ld gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua,觀點(diǎn)對立型寫作模板,
24、1.正反觀點(diǎn)對比 The topic about 話題 is becoming more and more popular in 范圍 recently. There are two sides of opinion about it. Some people prefer to consider doing sth.They think that 理由一，whats more,理由二，moreover,理由三。 However,others belive 觀點(diǎn)is a better choice for free reasons. To begin with, 理由一，next，理由二，in
25、addition, 理由三。 From my point of view, the formmer is surely a wise choice. The reason is that 原因。,2.優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)對比 In recent years, 所要討論的問題has been popular. There are many advantages in First, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)一，second，優(yōu)點(diǎn)二，third，優(yōu)點(diǎn)三。 However，there are some disadvantages. First, 缺點(diǎn)一，besides，缺點(diǎn)二，also，缺點(diǎn)三。 In my opinion, it i
26、s true that advantages are more than disadvantages. I think 自己的觀點(diǎn)。,各抒己見型議論文,要注意的幾個(gè)問題： 1.主題句的問題。 2.段落銜接的問題，要有過渡句。 3.論據(jù)到底應(yīng)分幾點(diǎn)來說？ 典型、 精煉 4.議論文一定要有架構(gòu)意識。,2007 山東省高考書面表達(dá),今年，教育部直屬師范大學(xué)將招收一批免費(fèi)師范生，學(xué)生畢業(yè)后須回生源所在省份的中小學(xué) 任教十年以上，你愿意成為一名免費(fèi)師范生嗎？請陳述理由。,Yes, I want to be such a student. First, it goes without saying tha
27、t a four-term-free pay will set me free from the high tuition, which is usually to be a heavy financial burden for my family.Then, I could entirely throw myself into my study. Second, I love teaching and have a long-cherished dream to be a teacher. I maintain that nothing can give me more pleasure t
28、han teaching because I am eager to see my students make progress and be the backbone of our country in the future. Moreover, to be a teacher is one part of my duties that I should do.By doing this I can make good contributions to our countrys education. Therefore, I take great pride to do that and I will do the best I can do and be the best I can be.,
高考英語議論文復(fù)習(xí)寫作.ppt
