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1、 書面表達（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫。Dear MS Jenkins, Im Li Hua from English writing class. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job in a foreign company in my city during the summer

2、vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my applicat

3、ion letter and resume in the attachment（附件 ）. Thank you for your kindness! ( 102 Words) Yours, Li HUa 佳作欣賞-2016高考全國I卷作文范文 2016高考全國I卷作文范文鑒賞。=用詞的地道=句式的高級=句句之間的銜接經(jīng)典累積我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些時間來瀏覽一下他們并作出必要的改變我會很感激。然而，并且，但是ask for your help; apply for; make changesI know you have a very busy schedule , but I d be

4、 very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.however- and-; but; Writing 寫出優(yōu)質(zhì)句子，突破作文高分 學習目標 1. 能夠鑒賞范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表達形式。 2. 通過合作講解： 能夠?qū)懗稣_的簡單句 能夠創(chuàng)作出精彩高檔句3. 掌握如何評價一份作文。 第 二 步 ： 找 出 修 飾 成 分 ， 添 加 修 飾 成 分 。 第 一 步 ： 找 出 句 子 主 干 ， 翻 譯 句 子 主 干 。 例 句 ：為 了 逃 避 挨 罵

5、 ， 那 個 淘 氣 的 男孩 沒 關(guān) 水 龍 頭 就 跑 了 。 第 一 步 ： 找 出 句 子 主 干 ， 翻 譯 句 子 主 干 。 男孩 跑 了 注 意 ： 時 態(tài) 和 語 態(tài)The boy ran away. =That naughty boy ran away.=That naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.=In order to escape being scolded, the naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.為 了 逃 避 挨 罵 ， 那

6、個 淘 氣 的 男 孩 沒 關(guān) 水 龍 頭 就 跑 了 。 第 二 步 ： 找 出 修 飾 成 分 ， 添 加 修 飾 成 分 技 巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞詞 匯 可 以 衡 量 英 語 水 平豐 富 的 句 式 可 以 使 文 章 增色 生 輝 。恰 當 的 連 接 詞 ， 使 文 章 有“ 英 語 味 ” ， 上 下 銜 接 自然 。2. 使用較豐富的句式 1. 短語優(yōu)先：我們想要和平。她決定好好學習。We look forward to /call on peace.一 、 怎 樣 使 用 較 高 級 詞 匯We want peace.She decided to

7、study hard.She was determined to devote herself to studying. 2. 棄舊取新: There is a temple on top of the mountain. There is a clean river in the city一 、 怎 樣 使 用 較 高 級 詞 匯A clean river winds through the city.On top of the mountain stands a temple. 1. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. 2. You can find my

8、 house easily.3. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 4. What we can do is to study hard. 5. The teacher suggested that we should pay attention to grammar. 一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯A good idea suddenly occurred to me. Youll have no trouble finding my house. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Wh

9、at we can do is to devote ourselves to study. The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should attach great importance to grammar. 1. 感嘆句 How happy I was when I received your letter!2. 倒裝句 Not only can it help you to form the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability

10、 and skills.3. 省略句 While walking the dog, I witnessed a car accident. 二 .如 何 使 用 較 豐 富 的 句 式 4. it做形式主語或賓語 It is of great benefit to keep diaries every day.5. 定語從句In my spare time, I regularly take part in the English corner, where I can express myself freely. 6. 名詞性從句What is the most important is t

11、hat I often surf onan English website -Enjoy Reading. 6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much. （使用名詞性從句）7. He didnt realize the truth until he came back. (使用強調(diào)句型) 8. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)9. When you realize the importance of foreign languages, y

12、ou can learn them well. (使用倒裝句)10. He lay on the ground and his eyes were fixed on the ceiling. （使用with復合結(jié)構(gòu)） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so much. 二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式 It was not until he came back that he realized the truth.She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.Only when

13、you realize the importance of foreign languages can you learn them well.He lay on the ground with his eyes fixed on the ceiling. 11. His mother lost work and his father was put into prison. 三、怎樣巧妙使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞His mother lost work, and to make things worse, his father was put into prison. 可以使文章銜接緊湊，有“英語味”的一些

14、關(guān)聯(lián)詞(1) 表示對比的連接詞 : on the contrary(2) 表示時間的連接詞: in the meanwhile，afterwards, eventually，in the end， (3) 表示順序的連接詞: first of all， to begin with， last but not the least (4) 表示遞進的連接詞 : what is more， in addition(5) 表示原因的連接詞: due to， thanks to， owing to(6) 用于總結(jié)的連接詞 : on the whole， in a word， in brief， (7)

15、表達個人觀點的短語: As far as Im concerned, in ones opinion/ view 三 、 怎 樣 巧 妙 使 用 關(guān) 聯(lián) 詞 可以使文章銜接緊湊，有“英語味”的一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞(1) 正相反(2) 在此期間 (3)后來(4)起初，首先(5)另外，還有(6)因為，由于，多虧 (7)從整體上來說 (8) 以我之見 on the contraryin the meanwhile afterwards first of all， to begin withwhat is more， in additiondue to， thanks to， owing toon the whole，As far as Im concerned, in ones opinion/ view