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1、單元寫作
寫作五步成文(應(yīng)用文)
[2019·曲阜師大附中期中]假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國筆友Tom在春節(jié)期間要到曲阜游玩,同時(shí)約你一起去逛三孔(即孔府、孔廟和孔林)。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給他寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn):
1.表示歡迎;
2.接受邀請;
3.行程安排。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:孔府the Confucius Mansion;孔廟the Confucius Temple;孔林the Confucius Cemetery
Dear Tom,
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2、________________________________________________
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3、____________________________________________
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Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
步驟一:審題構(gòu)思——分析透徹是前提
一、審題
1.確定體裁:本文為應(yīng)用文,要求寫電子郵件(旅行計(jì)劃)。
2.確定人稱:本文的主要人稱為第一、二人稱。
3.確定時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。
二、構(gòu)思
第一段:表示歡迎,接受邀請。
第二段:旅行安
4、排(第一天參觀孔府和孔廟,然后參觀孔林、品嘗小吃)。
第三段:表達(dá)愿望。
步驟二:精挑細(xì)選——核心詞匯想周全
1.more_than_glad 非常高興
2.express_a_warm_welcome_to... 對……表示熱烈歡迎
3.on_the_first_day 第一天
4.take_pictures 照相
5.pay_a_visit_to... 參觀……
6.far_away_from 離……遠(yuǎn)
7.enjoy_delicious_local_food 品嘗當(dāng)?shù)孛朗?
8.have_a_good_time 玩得愉快
步驟三:遣詞造句
5、——由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)
1.我非常高興你打算來曲阜參觀。(主系表+其他成分)
I'm_very_glad_to_learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit.
2.我對你表示熱烈的歡迎。(主謂賓)
I_will_express_a_warm_welcome_to_you.
3.第一天我們要參觀孔府和孔廟。(主謂賓狀)
We'll_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_day.
4.我們可以拍照并購買禮物。(主謂賓)
We_can_take_
6、some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts.
5.我們可以乘公共汽車參觀孔林。(主謂賓狀)
We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus.
6.它離市中心很遠(yuǎn)。(主系表+其他成分)
It's_far_away_from_the_center_of_the_city.
7.你可以品嘗當(dāng)?shù)氐拿朗场?主謂賓)
You_can_enjoy_the_delicious_local_food.
步驟四:斟酌打磨——句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)
1.用more than升級(jí)第1句
I'm_more_than_glad_to_
7、learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit.
2.用where把第3、4句升級(jí)為含定語從句的復(fù)合句
We'll_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_day,_where_we_can_take_some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts.
3.用because把第5、6句升級(jí)為含原因狀語從句的復(fù)合句
We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus_because_
8、it's_far_away_from_the_center_of_the_city.
4.用such as豐富第7句
You can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu.
步驟五:連句成文——邏輯銜接連成篇(可能會(huì)用到for the following days, at the same time等詞語)
Dear Tom,
I'm more than glad to learn that you plan to come to Qufu for a visit this Spring Fest
9、ival. So first I will express a warm welcome to you and I am willing to be with you.
We'll visit the Confucius Mansion and the Confucius Temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts. For the following days, we can pay a visit to the Confucius Cemetery by bus because it's far away from the center of the city. At the same time, you can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu and do some shopping. I hope you can have a good time in Qufu.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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