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1、 Period 5 Writing
應(yīng)用文寫作——道歉信
技法指導(dǎo)
道歉信是指因過失或疏忽給別人帶來麻煩或損失后,寫信給對方賠禮道歉的信件。道歉是一種禮貌,道歉信要寫得坦率、誠懇。
道歉信通常包括三部分內(nèi)容:
(1)向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢狻?
(2)說明道歉的原因,對失誤或錯誤進(jìn)行解釋(一般要求自由發(fā)揮)。
(3)提出補(bǔ)救措施,請求原諒。
注意:語言要誠懇,理由要真實。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解,還會增進(jìn)彼此的感情。
經(jīng)典句式
1.常用開頭句式:
I am writing to make an apology to you for ...
我寫信是因為……向你道歉。
2、
I regret to inform you that I can't attend the meeting on Friday.
很遺憾地告知你我不能參加周五的會議了。
I sincerely apologize for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我誠摯地為那天我說的話向你道歉。我不是有意傷害你的。
I will be very grateful if you can listen to my explanation.
如果您能聽我解釋,我將不勝感激。
Much to my regret, I am un
3、able to ... And I wish that my apology would help to some extent.
非常遺憾我不能夠……希望我的道歉在某種程度上能起到作用。
I am sorry to tell you that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Friday afternoon as we planned last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise.
我很遺憾地告訴你我不能按照我們上周的計劃周五下午和你一起去書店了。我為自己不能遵守承
4、諾向你道歉。
I sincerely apologize for my careless mistake as well as any inconvenience thus caused to you.
我真誠地為我的粗心錯誤以及由此給您帶來的任何不便道歉。
2.常用主體段句式:
To make up my fault, I will ...
為了彌補(bǔ)我的過失,我將……
We assure you that such a matter will never happen again.
我們向您保證,此類事件絕不會再發(fā)生。
I'm sorry I can't give the
5、book back to you on time as I promised before. But I will buy a new one for you later.
我很抱歉不能遵守之前的承諾按時把書還給你。但是之后我會為你買一本新的。
With the final exam around the corner, I was so occupied preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment ... could we find a suitable time to have a get-together so that
6、 I can make up for my careless mistake?
期末考試將近,我忙于準(zhǔn)備考試竟然忘記了我們之間的約會……能否再找個合適的時間小聚一下以彌補(bǔ)由于我的疏忽而造成的錯誤?
I am terribly sorry for not having attended your class on time. I have got a headache for several days and it is my first time to live in Chongqing so I cannot adapt to the weather here quickly.
我為不
7、能按時上您的課感到非常抱歉。我這些天一直在頭痛,而且,這是我第一次來重慶生活,還不能很快適應(yīng)這里的天氣。
3.常用結(jié)尾句式:
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.
我真誠地希望你能接受我的道歉。
Please allow me to say sorry again.
請允許我再次向您說聲抱歉。
Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
希望您能理解我的處境,接受我的道歉。
Please let me know which solution you pr
8、efer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
請讓我盡快知道您更喜歡哪種解決方法。我希望您能接受我真誠的道歉。
典例演練
假如你是李華,你的爸爸因為你撒謊感到很生氣。請根據(jù)下面提供的信息給你的爸爸寫一封道歉信,表達(dá)你的歉意和改正的決心。
1.寫信的原因以及表示歉意;
2.說明道歉的緣由;
3.再次致歉,表示自己要改正的決心。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù));
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
September 14
9、, 2019
Dear Dad,
With regards,
Your l
10、oving son,
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
September 14, 2019
Dear Dad,
The reason why I'm writing this letter is that I don't have the courage to face you. I want to apologize for disappointing you.
I have lied and hurt you so badly. I know I can never take back what I said. How I wish I could turn back the c
11、lock and make the right decision.
My dear Dad, please forgive me. You know, you are my both strength and weakness. If you don't support me, I can't even move just a single step. Please Dad, please accept my heartfelt apology. I promise you that I will be your good child. I will improve my behavior
12、and make you proud.
With regards,
Your loving son,
Li Hua
總評 本范文覆蓋所有要點,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)合理清晰,語言連貫平實,句式豐富多樣。感情真摯,充分顯示了寫信人的歉意和想要補(bǔ)救的決心,達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
[亮點呈現(xiàn)]
(1)The reason why I'm writing this letter is that I don't have the courage to face you.使用了“The reason why ... is that ...”句型。
(2)I know I can never take ba
13、ck what I said. How I wish I could turn back the clock and make the right decision. 使用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句以及“How I wish ...”句型,提升了文章檔次。
(3)最后一段多次用到“please ...”,言辭懇切,流露出作者真誠的道歉態(tài)度。
跟蹤演練
假如你是李華,想要為自己之前和父母吵架而道歉。請根據(jù)下面提供的信息給你的父母寫一封道歉信。
1.寫信的原因以及表示歉意;
2.表達(dá)自己對父母的愛,并說明道歉的緣由;
3.再次致歉請求原諒,表示自己以后不會再讓他們失望。
注意:1
14、.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù));
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:與某人吵架 quarrel with sb.
August 15, 2019
Dear Mom and Dad,
15、
Sincerely,
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
August 15, 2019
Dear Mom and Dad,
I know that I hurt you very badly yesterday. I am extremely sorry for my behavior and I have no courage to face you.
Dear Mom, I love you more than my life. Whe
16、n I was a kid, you were the one who always stood by me, who cared about me, who loved me more than anything. When I was sick, you took care of me the whole night. And Dad, you are my real superhero. When I did anything wrong, you always pointed it out at once and showed me the right way. I've thoug
17、ht about my actions and I've realized that I was wrong for the way I acted. I want to apologize.
I have made up my mind that I will never repeat it in future anymore. I assure you that I will never let you down. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
課外拓展閱讀——中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練
閱讀下面材料,在空
18、白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個單詞)或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。
Many traditional Chinese foods are intended to honour either the gods __1__ extraordinary persons in history. Zongzi is no exception. It is designed __2__ (honour) Qu Yuan, the pioneer poet of ancient China.
Qu Yuan was a famous poet who was also concerned about the f
19、ortune of his government. Unfortunately he was distrusted by the king, __3__ forced him to go to a remote area.
The poet felt __4__ (hope) about the government and its policies. When the state's capital __5__ (seize) by its enemies, he drowned himself in the Miluo River (on May 5th according to the
20、 Chinese lunar calendar). As __6__ respected poet, his death was a big loss to the country. Local people searched __7__ him in the river. Meanwhile, they dropped dumplings of sticky rice wrapped in bamboo __8__ (leaf) into the river in order to keep the fishes from attacking Qu Yuan's body.
Since t
21、hat time, it __9__ (be) a custom to enjoy Zongzi as a memorial to Qu Yuan. In addition, there is also a festival __10__ (call) the Duanwu Festival or the Dragon Boat Festival, when there is a nationwide practice of enjoying Zongzi.
1.________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________
5.________ 6.________
22、7.________ 8.________
9.________ 10.________
答案:1.or 2.to honour 3.who 4.hopeless 5.was seized 6.a 7.for 8.leaves 9.has been 10.called
Qu Yuan's poetry, called Chu Ci, is full of romantic hyperbole and imagination, revealing the current ills of the society, showing deep love for his people.
屈原的詩被稱作“楚辭”,充滿了浪漫主義的夸張和想象,揭露了當(dāng)時社會的黑暗,表達(dá)了對人民的熱愛。
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