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第五編 好作文是“仿”出來的。針對全國卷近幾年一直穩(wěn)定考查書信文體這一命題實(shí)際，我們對每一體裁精心架構(gòu)寫作模板，循模板寫作，確保像模像樣、文正體范；迅速打開思路，縮短考場構(gòu)思時間。 寫作模板(一)　良藥“甜”口，忠言“順”耳——建議信 [題型技法] 建議信是作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法或觀點(diǎn)；也可以寫給某個組織或者機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等提出建議或忠告。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： [典例悟法] (2018北京高考書面表達(dá))假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1．表示歡迎； 2．推薦他上哪所大學(xué)； 3．建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。 注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50； 2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim， Yours， Li Hua 滿分范文 Dear Jim， Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest wele to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will e true and its my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day es. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours， Li Hua 范文賞析 (1)范文首段交代寫信目的并表示歡迎；第二段闡述建議他上北京大學(xué)的原因及需要做的準(zhǔn)備工作；最后一段表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章一氣呵成、要點(diǎn)齊全且銜接流暢自然。 (2)文中運(yùn)用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高級詞匯；句式方面的高級表達(dá)有：I would like to express my warmest wele ...恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了不定式作賓語；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；one of the best universities in China作同位語；where you can be pletely soaked in恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了定語從句； its my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主語。 [增分佳句] 1．表達(dá)建議信寫信目的常用語 ①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice. 我寫信給你一些建議/忠告。 ②I am writing to express my views concerning ... 我寫信是要表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的看法。 ③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 關(guān)于……你向我征求意見，在此我盡力提出一些有用的建議。 2．表達(dá)建議常用語 ①I think the most suitable ...for you is ... 我認(rèn)為對你來說最適合的……是…… ②I would like to suggest that ... 我想建議…… ③Youd better .../Its better to ... 你最好……/最好是…… ④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看來，采取如下行動是明智的。 ⑤For one thing ...; for another ... 一方面……，另一方面…… ⑥If I were you, I would ... 如果我是你，我會…… ⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 我認(rèn)為如果你能……將會更有益。 3．表達(dá)希望常用語 ①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 我希望你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。 ②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望你會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。 ③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在這一方面取得進(jìn)步我會非常高興。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] (2019長沙模擬)假定你是李華，你的好友王芳喜歡打排球，但老師和家長都極力勸她放棄打排球，全身心投入高考。為此，她非常糾結(jié)和郁悶。請你給她寫一封建議信，幫她解決這個困擾。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Wang Fang， I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you dont want to do that. I think you dont need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions. First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third，you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not object to it. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 寫作模板(二)　自信申請，心誠則靈——申請信 [題型技法] 申請信有很多種，比如求職申請、加入某組織或活動的申請、報(bào)考申請、留學(xué)申請等。寫申請信的目的在于讓對方了解自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、能力、成就、愿望等，所以個人情況的介紹應(yīng)該是申請信的核心內(nèi)容，應(yīng)盡可能向?qū)Ψ秸f明本人的長處，以便留下好印象，獲得面談的機(jī)會。由于此類題目常有較多的文字提示，寫作時除應(yīng)注意格式上的要求外，也應(yīng)注意審題全面，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并要注意人稱和時態(tài)的變化，避免出現(xiàn)邏輯混亂。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： [典例悟法] (2018浙江高考應(yīng)用文寫作)假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括： 1．口語能力； 2．相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)； 3．應(yīng)聘目的。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 滿分范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty municating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture. I would be grateful if you could give me the chance. Yours， Li Hua 范文賞析 (1)文章開門見山說明自己寫信的目的；然后詳述自己的優(yōu)勢以及目的，簡潔明了，不拖泥帶水；最后表達(dá)感謝和期盼。 (2)運(yùn)用了firstly ...secondly 等語序標(biāo)志詞，運(yùn)用了一些較為地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等，這些都使得這篇短文讀起來層次分明、連貫、順暢。 [增分佳句] 1．表達(dá)申請信寫信目的常用語 ①Im writing to apply for the position of ... 我寫信申請……的職位。 ②I am writing this letter to remend myself as a qualified candidate for ... 我寫信推薦自己為……的合格人選。 ③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program. 我對……感興趣，希望加入到這個重要項(xiàng)目中。 ④I learned on your website that ... 我從你們的網(wǎng)站上得知…… 2．表達(dá)個人優(yōu)勢的常用語 ①I won the first prize in ...petition. 我獲得了……比賽的一等獎。 ②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates. 作為一名外向的……我和同學(xué)們相處得很好。 ③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面，我能幫助……另一方面，我能提高…… ④My main specialty is ... 我的特長是…… 3．表達(dá)感謝，期盼回復(fù)的常用語 ①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ... 如果你們認(rèn)為我適合這份工作，請致電…… ②I will be grateful/Id appreciate it if you could ... 如果你能……我將感激不盡。 ③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. 感謝你考慮我的申請，期待與你見面。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] 假定你是李華，是一名高三學(xué)生。最近，你校將接待一批來自美國的交換生，學(xué)?，F(xiàn)在征集寄宿家庭。你想申請成為寄宿家庭，請根據(jù)下面的寫作提綱，寫一封申請信。內(nèi)容包括： 1．個人情況(年齡、性別、性格和愛好)； 2．英語水平； 3．家庭條件； 4．相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Sir/Madam， I am Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are ing to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to bee a host family. The following are my advantages.First, Im openminded and like to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty municating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience. I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 寫作模板(三)　以誠相邀，以禮相約——邀請信 [題型技法] 邀請信是邀請收信人參加某項(xiàng)活動的書信。在寫作時，要注意邀請信的交際性，語氣要真摯，避免帶有不禮貌或強(qiáng)人所難的字眼。根據(jù)邀請信的性質(zhì)可將其分為普通邀請信和正式邀請信。普通邀請信對內(nèi)容和格式的要求都不高，只要說明活動的內(nèi)容、時間、地點(diǎn)等即可。正式邀請信的措辭要正式、語氣要熱情有禮，態(tài)度要誠懇。邀請信的末尾都要表達(dá)希望對方參加或出席的愿望。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： [典例悟法] (2018天津高考書面表達(dá))假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽。請根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。 (1)比賽的時間、地點(diǎn)； (2)邀請他的原因； (3)訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。 注意： (1)詞數(shù)不少于100； (2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫； (3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： 世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽the World Adolescent Robotics petition Dear Chris， I have good news to tell you. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Jin 滿分范文 Dear Chris， I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics petition is to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July, which interests me greatly. On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the petition. I know you once participated in a robotics petition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. We are desperately in need of your help. So as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us. I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. Whats more, I will email you our training plan soon, hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Jin 范文賞析 (1)文章開門見山交代比賽的時間和地點(diǎn)，隨后說明自己和同學(xué)組成團(tuán)隊(duì)參賽并邀請Chris加入，并希望Chris對計(jì)劃提出建議，言簡意賅。 (2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯，如interest作動詞， form a group, participate in, accumulate, desperately in need of, joint efforts, undoubtedly等。在句式方面，既有which引導(dǎo)的定語從句又有名詞性從句I am convinced that ...和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語 hoping you ...等。 [增分佳句] 1．發(fā)出邀請常用語 ①I am writing to invite you to .../Im writing to tell you that there will be a ... 我寫信邀請你……/我寫信告訴你有一個(場)…… ②I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ...to be held in ... 我很高興邀請你參加在……舉行的…… ③I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ... 我想你要是能來參加……那就太好了。 2．表達(dá)活動內(nèi)容常用語 ①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows. 本次活動的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容如下。 ②During the ...we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in.First ...Second ...In addition ... 在……期間我們將有很多你會感興趣的活動。第一……第二……另外…… ③I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities at the party.For one thing ...For another ... 我相信你一定對聚會上的活動很感興趣。一方面……另一方面…… 3．結(jié)尾部分常用語 ①Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can e to ...? 請寫信告訴我是否你能來……好嗎？ ②If you are interested in it, please let me know and Ill send you more information. 如果你感興趣，請告訴我，我給你發(fā)送更多的信息。 ③My family and I would feel much honored if you could e. 如果你能來，我和我的家人將會感到非常榮幸。 ④I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon. 我想在那里見到你，請盡快告訴我你的決定。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] 假定你是李華，是學(xué)校英語俱樂部的負(fù)責(zé)人。請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給學(xué)校的外教Steve寫一封邀請信。 1．邀請Steve參加于周一晚上7點(diǎn)鐘在學(xué)校禮堂舉行的英語角活動； 2．請Steve介紹“美國夢(American Dream)”； 3．請Steve根據(jù)自己學(xué)漢語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)談?wù)勅绾翁岣哂⒄Z口語。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Steve， On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Corner next Monday.It will begin at seven oclock in the evening at the school hall. In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still dont have any knowledge about it.So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese.Could you share with us some experience on how to improve our oral English? We are all looking forward to seeing you then.Please inform us in advance if you cannot e. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 寫作模板(四)　真誠道謝，友誼長存——感謝信 [題型技法] 感謝信是向幫助、關(guān)心和支持過自己的集體或個人表示感謝的信件。在收到別人的邀請、受到別人的表揚(yáng)或幫助后，被邀請者、被表揚(yáng)者或被幫助者往往需要寫一封感謝信。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： [典例悟法] 假定你是李華。最近，你剛結(jié)束在英國為期一個月的交流學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)習(xí)期間，你和房東Mr.Wilson結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請根據(jù)下面的寫作提綱，給Mr.Wilson寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括： 1．表示感謝； 2．回顧他對你的照顧和幫助； 3．邀請他來中國游覽。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 滿分范文 Dear Mr.Wilson， How is everything going? Ive been back home now.Im writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness. While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me.By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improved my spoken English. I hope we can keep in touch with and municate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to e to China so that you can experience Chinese culture. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 范文賞析 (1)文章開篇問候，真誠地表達(dá)感謝。隨后說明感謝的原因以及對方給予的具體幫助。最后表達(dá)希望，并邀請他來中國旅游。 (2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型，如gratitude是高級詞匯，體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語言功底。句中使用了感嘆句和定語從句，大大提高了表達(dá)難度和寫作檔次。高級短語keep in touch with和municate with的正確使用為文章錦上添花；在It would be a great honor ...句中it作形式主語，so that ...引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句，都顯示了作者對復(fù)雜句式的運(yùn)用能力，增加了文章得分的亮點(diǎn)。 [增分佳句] 1．感謝信開頭部分常用語 ①I am writing to express my thanks for ... 我寫信是為了表達(dá)我對……的謝意。 ②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...在信中我要為……向你表達(dá)我誠摯的謝意。 ③On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ... 我謹(jǐn)代表我全家對……表示真誠的感激。 ④I am extremely grateful to you for ... 我非常感謝你…… ⑤Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ...非常感謝您為幫助我們……所做的一切。 2．感謝信結(jié)尾常用語 ①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever. 沒什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶，我們會永遠(yuǎn)牢記在心。 ②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you！/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次對你表示衷心的感謝。/對你的熱心幫助再次表示感謝。 ③I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ... 如果我有機(jī)會通過……報(bào)答你的好意，我會非常高興。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] 假設(shè)你是李華，上周日不慎把書包遺失在操場上，里面有學(xué)生證、手機(jī)、錢包等物品，本校外教Mr. Smith撿到后上交給學(xué)校。請你用英語給他寫一封感謝信。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag. Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my students ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the schools Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in. Its such a great kindness that Im extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us. Yours, Li Hua 寫作模板(五)　誠懇致歉，你我歡顏——道歉信 [題型技法] 道歉信通常是在因自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺的情況下，為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶?。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下： [典例悟法] (2016全國卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．說明原因； 3．另約時間。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 滿分范文 Dear Bob， I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours， Li Hua 范文賞析 (1)文章開篇表明寫作意圖，表達(dá)歉意。隨后說明道歉的原因并解釋不能赴約的原因?！霸俅蜗嗉s”部分，情節(jié)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，情真意切。 (2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高級詞匯，并運(yùn)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和that I have to attend ...; so that ...引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句； If its convenient for you ...為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句； If not ...狀語從句的省略等。這展示了作者對復(fù)雜句式較強(qiáng)的運(yùn)用能力，增加了文章得分的亮點(diǎn)。 [增分佳句] 1．道歉信開頭常用語 ①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ... 我寫這封信是因……向你道歉。 ②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ... 因?yàn)闆]能……我向你表達(dá)最真誠的歉意/悔意。 ③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.為此事可能給你帶來的任何不便，我深表歉意。 ④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ... 我必須為……真誠地向你道歉。 ⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ... 我遺憾地告知你我不能…… 2．道歉信結(jié)尾常用語 ①Please allow me to say sorry again. 請?jiān)试S我再次道歉。 ②Will you please accept my apology? 請你接受我的道歉，好嗎？ ③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more. 請?jiān)俅螢椤邮芪艺嬲\的道歉。 ④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心希望你能寬容地接受我的道歉。 ⑤Once again, Im sorry for my inconvenience caused. 對于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] 假定你是李華，你從朋友Mike處借的一本書不慎遺失。現(xiàn)在，請用英文給他寫一封道歉信，請求原諒。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．開頭與結(jié)束語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Mike， 　 Yours， Li Hua 參考范文： Dear Mike， Im sorry to tell you that Ive lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now Im expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness. Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that Ill tighten my belt these days to get you a pletely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 寫作模板(六)　禮貌求助，成功首步——求助信 [題型技法] 寫英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困難，需要請求對方幫助。因此整篇文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時表達(dá)文意，當(dāng)描述自己得到幫助后的進(jìn)步時應(yīng)用一般將來時。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下： [典例悟法] (2016全國卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 滿分范文 Dear Ms Jenkins， Im Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital pany during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, Im not sure about the words and format. Therefore, Im writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. Id be most grateful if you could do me the favor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 范文賞析 (1)文章開篇自我介紹并表明寫信意圖。隨后說明求助的具體內(nèi)容(請對方幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表達(dá)希望和感激。 (2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型，如therefore關(guān)系明確，因果適當(dāng)，不但使上下文融會貫通，而且突出了寫信目的。Would you please do ...？是請求別人幫助的句型，用得恰到好處，符合說話者的身份；過去分詞attached作定語，使句子更加簡練地道，增加了文章的可讀性。Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表達(dá)了相同的意思，避免了表達(dá)形式的單一化，語氣委婉。這是文章提檔次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到幫助的迫切和感激之情，也展示了作者較高的語言運(yùn)用能力。 [增分佳句] 1．求助信開頭常用語 ①M(fèi)y name is ...Im writing to you for some help. 我叫……，我寫信是向你尋求一些幫助。 ②Im writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor. 我給你寫信想請你幫我一個忙。 ③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做……方面有困難，這很困擾我。所以我別無選擇只能向你求助。 ④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面對如此多的困難，我不得不向你求助。 2．尋求幫助常用語 ①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想讓你給我介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)語法的好方法。 ②I wonder how to deal with the problem. 我想知道如何解決這個問題。 3．求助信結(jié)尾常用語 ①Im sure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的幫助下我會取得很大的進(jìn)步。 ②I will appreciate any of your help. 我將非常感謝你的一切幫助。 ③I would greatly appreciate your timely help. 我將非常感激你及時的幫助。 [熱點(diǎn)押題] 假定你是高中生李華，你們學(xué)校要在3月10日舉辦英語配音比賽(dubbing contest)。你想?yún)①悾遣恢涝撨x什么電影。你給筆友Peter寫一封郵件，請他給你推薦一部電影。內(nèi)容包括： 1．主題是關(guān)于友誼； 2．時間限定在4到5分鐘； 3．每個節(jié)目最多6個角色。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Peter， How is everything going？I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help. Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I dont know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some remendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.Whats more, there should not be more than six characters in each video. I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 寫作模板(七)　書信往來，快樂分享——普通書信與電子郵件 [題型技法] 英文email和普通書信的寫法和格式大體相同，其開頭和結(jié)尾常常都會給出，正文根據(jù)作文要求分段把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚即可。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下： [典例悟法] (2017全國卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括： 1．時間和地點(diǎn)； 2．內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩； 3．課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 滿分范文 Dear Leslie， I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now Im writing to tell you the plan for the next class. Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the Peoples Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8：00 am to 10：00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned. If you have any questions, please let me