廣東省2014高考英語一輪短文改錯、書面表達訓練.doc

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廣東省2014高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（10）附參考范文 短文改錯專項訓練 　　此題要求改正所給短文的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正： 　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉；在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）；在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；該行錯一個詞，在錯的詞下劃一個橫線；在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。 　　Li Ming, who has been working as postman for 1．________ two years, always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2．________ He worked with care as well as with effort. He 3．________ serves for the people heart and soul. Every day he 4．________ gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5．________ He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6．________ One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7．________ to be raining hardly outside. But he set out immediately． 8．________ He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9．________ he tried to hand the letter to the right person. 10．________ 參考答案 1．postman→ ∧　a postman　 2．uniforms → uniform 3．worked→works　 4．for（刪去）　 5．or→and　 6．and→that 7．√　 8．hardly→hard　 9．after→before　 10．tried→managed ************************************************************結束 光明中學英語俱樂部最近在招聘英語角的組織者，假設你是李華，想申請成為英語角的組織者，請按下列要點寫一封申請信： 1．擅長英語口語，參加過許多英語活動； 2．有信心做好這項工作； 3．申請成功后的打算。 注意：1．詞數120左右； 2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Dear Sir/Madam， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 參考范文： Dear_Sir/Madam， I am Li Hua，a student in Senior One.Im writing to apply for the position of the organizer of the English Corner. Im good at spoken English and often take part in various English activities.I am sure that this job will bring me a lot of experience in organizing activities and communicating in English.I believe I can be a successful organizer.If I become the organizer，I will organize a series of activities，such as English Song Singing Contest，English Lecture，English Movie Week and so on. I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Yours， Li_Hua **************************************************************結束 第二節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分） 此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷；如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正： 此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（?。﹦澋?，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。 此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。 此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。 注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。 Everyone can do something for our environment.For me, 76._______ I should try to save electricity in our daily life. For example, 77._______ if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, 78._______ I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to 79._______ protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try 80._______ to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I would 81._______ not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82._______ because they are made of wood. I believe that by doing all 83._______ these small things will improve our environment but help 84._______ make our world the much better place to live. 85._______ 答案與解析 76. √ 77.our→my。代詞的錯誤。這里與主語保持一致，用my表示“在我的日常生活中”。 78. leave 前加to。非謂語動詞的錯誤。這里用不定式做定語修飾the last person . 79. on→off。動詞短語的錯誤。語境表示把燈關掉而不是打開，因此用turn on。 80. wise→wisely。副詞的錯誤。用 而不是形容詞做狀語表示方式。 81. would→will。時態(tài)的錯誤。這里與語境保持一致，用一般將來時而不是過去將來時。 82. cup→cups。名詞的錯誤。用復數名詞cups表示泛指。 83.by刪除。從句子結構看，這里的v.-ing結構做句子主語，應該將介詞刪除。 84. but→and連詞的錯誤。這里表示順接和遞進關系，用連詞and而不是but。 85. the→a。冠詞的錯誤。這里表示“一個更好的地方”，用a better place而不是“那個更好的地方”；注意后面的place to live是正確的，可以將掉尾介詞in省略。 **************************結束 高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作 　7．The Most Important Thing in the World / money is everything 　　Directions： 　　A）Title：The Most Important Thing in the World 　　B）提示：有人認為，世界上最重要的東西是“錢”。許多人不同意這個看法。 　　請就這個問題談談你的意見。 　　C）Time limit：30minutes 　　D）Word limit：150～200words 　　E）Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet. 　　The Most Important Thing in the World 　　In my opinion，the most important thing in the world is TIME. However long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it. 　　Even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society. 　　Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question：Can you buy time？ 　　The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people. 　 ************************************************************結束 3.下圖描繪的是中國當前教育中存在的問題。請你根據對下面這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文，描述一下造成這種現象的原因并發(fā)表你的看法。 【參考范文】 3. The two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. In the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw hopes to have a school to attend. In the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. He wishes he didn’t have to go to school any more. The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave school because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, although the children in the cities can have regular education, they have to face endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies. Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with this problem. For one thing, things must be done to ensure that children in the poor areas can receive education. For another , We should try to reduce the pressure on the students. In a word, the whole society should work together to make some contributions to our education. *********************************************************結束 假如你是新華中學的一名學生。你校擬招聘一名外籍教師。請根據下面的要求寫一篇招聘啟事。 對應聘者的要求：1．母語是英語，大學畢業(yè)； 2．身體健康，交際能力強； 3．有教學經驗者優(yōu)先，工資面議。 工作條件：1．學校交通便利，環(huán)境優(yōu)美； 2．每周工作五天，提供住宿。 有意者請在八月底之前聯(lián)系李老師。聯(lián)系電話：01088663528或發(fā)郵件至：Mrli2011@sohu.com。 注意：1．詞數120左右； 2．參考詞匯：應聘者applicant。 English Teacher Wanted ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 參考范文： English Teacher Wanted Xinhua Middle School plans to invite a foreigner to work as a teacher of English.The applicant should be a native speaker of English and has graduated from university.He or she should be healthy physically and mentally，with great ability to communicate with students.Teaching experience is preferred.He or she has to work 5 days a week. Xinhua Middle School lies near the center of the city，so the traffic is very convenient.There is an apartment for foreign teachers to live in. If you are interested，please contact Mr Li at Mrli2011@sohu.com before the end of August，2012．The salary can be discussed during the interview. ***********************************************************結束 (201*成都檢測) My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________ and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________ will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________ have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________ as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________ think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________ we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________ and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________ medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________ some food for picnics. Im sure that we will have fun.10.________ 答案與解析： 1．am→are　本句的主句是my father and I，所以謂語動詞用復數形式。 2．but→and　此處表示的是順承關系，而不是轉折關系。 3．刪去第二個the　一般情況下，表示國家的單個詞語前不加冠詞。 4．spend→cost　本句的主語不是人，而是it，所以用cost。 5．had→have　短文全篇敘述的都是現在和將來的情況。 6．what→that/which或刪去what　“that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句，修飾先行詞the car，關系代詞在從句中作賓語，可以省略。 7．them→us　根據文章的開頭部分可知這里指的是作者本人和作者的父親，因此應用us。 8．possibly→possible　as...as possible表示“盡可能……”。 9．prevent前加to　此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。 10．√ **********************************************************結束 ***寫作指導********* 多使用過渡性詞語。這樣使文章更加連貫、更具有邏輯性。 （1）表示增加的過渡詞：also，and，and then，too，in addition，furthermore，moreover，again，on top ofthat，another，first second third等。 （2）表示時間順序的過渡詞：now，then，before，after，afterwards，earlier，lat er，immediately，soon，next，in afew days，gradually，suddenly，finally等。（3）表示空間順序的過渡詞：near（to），far（from），in frontof，behind，beside，beyond，above，below，tothe right left，around，outside等。 （4）表示比較的過渡詞：in thesameway，justlike，justas等。 （5）表示對照的過渡詞：but，still，yet，however，on theotherhand，onthecon trary，in spite of，even though等。 （6）表示結 果 和 原 因 的 過 渡 詞：because，since，so，as a result，therefore，then，thus，otherwise等。 （7）表示目的的過渡詞：forthisreason，forthispurpose，so that等。 （8）表示強調的過渡詞：in fact，indeed，surely，necessarily，certainly，withoutanydoubt，truly，torepeat，aboveall，mostimportant等。 （9）表示解釋說明的過渡詞：forexample，in fact，in thiscase，foractually等。 （10）表示總結的過渡詞：finally，atlast，inconclusion，asIhaveshown，inoth erword，in brief，in short，in general，on the whole，ashasbeen stated等。 ***************************************************************結束